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Sometimes, I am invisible.

I like you and I think that you might like me too.
But then some days, when I sit down next to you
And take a peek in your direction
To see if you'll talk to me again today,
You don't look at me at all,
And you don't say hello,
And you make it seem like you've never met me before.

I think it's because I am invisible sometimes.
I don't really have much to say about this, other than "it's not much of a poem."

Poem © ~ember-snow (A.K.A. Me)
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:iconpeanut-luvs-edward:
Peanut-luvs-Edward Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2009   Writer
thats exactly how it is with me and my crush!
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope things go better for you. Honestly, I really do. Good luck.
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:iconpeanut-luvs-edward:
Peanut-luvs-Edward Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2009   Writer
thanks
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course.
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:iconabietic-acid:
Abietic-Acid Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2008
haha story of my life
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:iconanimeotaku4life:
Animeotaku4life Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
Story of my life. :[ No lie. Amazing job. It's beautiful.
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much, sis. :hug:
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:iconlovers-lie:
Lovers-Lie Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2008
I like it.
It's honest, and simple, and matter-of-fact,
yet it has something, Spunk, Character, something.
I don't know, but I like it. :]
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. That means a lot to me. :)
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:iconi-like-sushi:
i-like-sushi Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008
Phsh. tell me about it. I know what you're saying. :)
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, it's a bummer.
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:iconi-like-sushi:
i-like-sushi Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2008
Well, it DOES have its advantages sometimes...
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I suppose so.
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:iconirisrose1818:
IrisRose1818 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008   Filmographer
i feel that way
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry.
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Sister-Nightroad7 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008
I like it, that might be because i feel the same way, but i like it.
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. I hope the person you're talking about notices you more.
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:iconsister-nightroad7:
Sister-Nightroad7 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
Here's luck to both of us.
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :)
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:iconannaruth:
AnnaRuth Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008
I am impressed sometimes.
Like now.

I assume this is from your point of view but while reading it I pictured a shy boy with ink stained fingers and a lot of books on his desk. Shy and green eyed. =)
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Really? Thank you.

Wow, that's a very detailed image. Are you thinking of a certain person?
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:iconannaruth:
AnnaRuth Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008
Nope. Sometimes you just get that feeling. Keep writing.
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, I see. Thank you, I will.
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:iconazuresky713:
Azuresky713 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008
I really like this! I haven't quite been down that road yet, but I have felt that way before...
^^ great work!
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much.
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:iconbubbleblossoms:
BubbleBlossoms Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008
lol. I totally understand this poem.
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Apparently a lot of people do.
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:iconbubbleblossoms:
BubbleBlossoms Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008
lol, I can see that :D
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Tiuni Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Professional Filmographer
Hmm, this actually seems more like a vignette than a poem. I think you'd be pretty good at those.

Anyway, I can't really say that I've ever felt this way [since I never really, REALLY liked a guy], but I can be empathetic. I hope you don't feel this way though, you're anything but invisible [though it WOULD be cool...]. D:
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
That's what I thought too! I looked through the categories on the dA submission thing, but I couldn't find one for vignettes. D: Unfortunately, I had to use "poem" as the category.

Ha ha, I actually wrote a series of six vignettes for my English teacher. A lot of people liked them. I enjoy writing them.

I'm actually not sure about what I feel. That's why the vignette doesn't say anything about if I feel sad or not. :? I'm just confused, really.
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Tiuni Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Professional Filmographer
Whaaat? That's lame. D:

Awesome! I love writing vignettes myself [mostly because I don't have to listen to grammar rules *shakes fist at them*]. You should put more up! :-D

Oh, okay. D: But just remember; boys are stupid. :idea:
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
It is! We should request that they put a category for vignettes in the submission process.

They are very fun to write! :D Maybe I will sometime. The ones I wrote for my English project had to be based off of a novel, so I don't know if I really want to put those up.

Ha ha, that's kind of true. XD
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:iconmusicfreak92:
mUsIcFrEaK92 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008   Photographer
I always feel this way :(
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, it's a bummer. I'm sorry that you feel that way.
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:iconcozican:
CozICan Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Student General Artist
Awww!! I know how that feels. It sucks a LOT.
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
It does, it does.
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:iconvirginia92:
virginia92 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008
i'm pretty sure i know how you feel, i've had that happen to me before
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
It's not a very good feeling. XD;
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:iconvirginia92:
virginia92 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008
no not at all
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:iconphilbert608:
Philbert608 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
me too
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tetemeko Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008
Fantastic job.
I really enjoyed reading it.
I'm always glad to find more writer's on dA.
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. :)
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:iconcellowriter:
CelloWriter Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008
I really like this. I know exactly how it feels. :)
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
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:iconvasogoma:
vasogoma Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008
I feel the same
it's nice ^^
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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:iconomg-kittens:
OMG-Kittens Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can totally relate to this. I've loved your writing since like 6th grade :)
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ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. It's not that good, anyway. I just wrote and didn't really think. I'm honored that you like my writing though. I've liked your art ever since 6th grade, heh heh. Do you remember that purple cat that you painted for me in Mrs. Onstott's class during free time?
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UnknownDanger Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008
Awwwww i can totally relate -nods-
It's good :D
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. Darn people for ignoring us, eh? XD;
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