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Sometimes, I am invisible.

I like you and I think that you might like me too.
But then some days, when I sit down next to you
And take a peek in your direction
To see if you'll talk to me again today,
You don't look at me at all,
And you don't say hello,
And you make it seem like you've never met me before.

I think it's because I am invisible sometimes.
I don't really have much to say about this, other than "it's not much of a poem."

Poem © ~ember-snow (A.K.A. Me)
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:iconpeanut-luvs-edward:
Peanut-luvs-Edward Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2009   Writer
thats exactly how it is with me and my crush!
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope things go better for you. Honestly, I really do. Good luck.
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:iconpeanut-luvs-edward:
Peanut-luvs-Edward Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2009   Writer
thanks
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course.
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Abietic-Acid Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2008
haha story of my life
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Animeotaku4life Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
Story of my life. :[ No lie. Amazing job. It's beautiful.
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:iconember-snow:
ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much, sis. :hug:
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Lovers-Lie Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2008
I like it.
It's honest, and simple, and matter-of-fact,
yet it has something, Spunk, Character, something.
I don't know, but I like it. :]
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ember-snow Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. That means a lot to me. :)
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:iconi-like-sushi:
i-like-sushi Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008
Phsh. tell me about it. I know what you're saying. :)
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